Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Too Too Sweet Elyse

We just came home about a half an hour ago. El and Eva are playing school, Eva is the teacher right now. Pretty cute! El's assignment is to write a poem. She wrote it to me. Here it is.

Makes kindness and love engulf the air
Only she can comfort me in my greatest despair
Makes ominous thoughts be repelled in her presence
Mine she will always be, even in different places and meeting different faces
Young or old, in life or death, her love is eternal even in the deepest depth

I am blessed.

6 comments:

Deb Seenarine Wilson said...

That is very sweet!!!

Kimberly said...

Uhhh. She's smart! :) I almost had to look up ominous in Websters!

Laura said...

Wow! El is the greatest!

Paola said...

wow - what an unbelievable vocabulary. that is absolutely amazing.

Pat said...

Elyse you are a great poet and writer but I
new that when you wrote the horse poem a
few years ago. I hope you grow up to be a
writer then you will fullfil my dream.
Great Job. Oh yes your mom is very lucky
to have a daughter that loves her like you do.
Maybe just maybe your mom deserves that love.

Ciao Bloggers said...

Mom really needs to ask MY PERMISSION before she posts theese things.